Thursday 25 May 2017

Archie and Blake retell 'The Three Little Pigs'

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  1. Great retelling Blake J of the Three Pigs and I like the way you just didn't say he blew the house down you actually made the sounds of puffing and blowing! (Luke)
    I liked your story the Three Little Pigs and that you made a different version of it! (Logan)
    We liked the way you changed the scenes, used great expression, you had super fluency, how you made the scenery, loved the pictures of the characters and the way you helped each other! (Tui)

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  2. Great story telling boys!

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